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The Truth Is Hidden: Part 1

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I cant believe what I just saw. Gareth is not the dragon I thought he was. No he is much different. I was shaking. I was up on this bloody rock bloody shaking. in bloody fear. OF MY OWN STUPID BLOODY DRAGON. WHICH I BLOODY TRAINED! I shut my crimson red eyes just of the memory of watching Gareth, kill one of my friends. Not just a friend. A close friend. A best friend. A friend who was like a brother I never had. I wept the tears of sadness as they seemed to mark my shadow that casts below me. The shadow follows me where ever I go. It never leaves. It will follow me, reflect on my actions, be the darker side of my bloody life. The wind howled a whisper of cold across my body as I hugged my legs for warmth. But no matter how much I physically hide from the world. Mentally all the bloody memories come seeking threw.

A shower of sparks landed on me I leapt to my feet only to see Gareth. He had a low face on him, he lower his head and made a low wine. His spines lower and raise, but still the liquid that represents death is lingering in his mouth, the crimson juice that once kept my best friend alive.

"JUST GO AWAY!" I yowled at Gareth. He looked hurt at me. He leaned in closer and tried to nuzzle me. I pushed him back. "YOU HAVE DONE ENOUGH HARM!" I cried within speech "JUST GO AND NEVER COME BACK!"

His red eyes met mine. He leaned in closer wining. Small lightning bolts flickers in his wings, with sadness. I pointed to the mountains "JUST GO... just go...just...." I started to weep as Gareth placed his head into my hand. Soft eyes staring at me. Forgiving me. Always there for me. The black dragon closed his eyes, his tail wrapped around me. I cried and moaned onto his chest. The dragon leaned in sharing his body heat. Making me feel safe. "I'm... sorry" I said readjusting my glasses. Gareth looked at me as if to say, "No need."

I hugged him one last time. "I know it was not your fault... blood brother..." I hadn't used the phrase 'blood brother 'since we met. He made a few purring sounds before snarling and turning the other way. I looked in the direction he was snarling in. But it was too late I was feeling drowsy and everything seem to wizz around and spin and get darker and I felt lightheaded.........................................................................
A friend of mine wrote this for me on Google+ and gave me permission to post it here. It stars me (as my OC) and my Skrill Gareth...
Hope you like it...
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CAN07's avatar
Well the truth is that this is a piece that the author tries to move a lot of emotions in one scene and for that it is great, however for that type of scenes to work properly you need to add context to it, you see this scene could work great in a middle of a story but here you put that his is part 1, In my humble opinion I would add more at the beginning and expand the scene to help the readers connect with the character.